Tuesday, 24 July 2012

My origins story- A story of a lone robot.

It was another lonely day,

I went for a walk in the woods, horrible smoke was blazing in the air. I suddenly saw a train go by 15km per hour, the fifth carriage had a logo like mine. It looked like I would find a friend or two, so I pounced on the sixth carriage. It zoomed all the way down a metal road it was so long so I went to sleep. I reached this weird factory it looked abandoned,but not for long,I walked some more a huge gate flung open without a push as if some ghost had opened it. Big forklifts screeched and pounded into sheds, with big shipping containers. They almost ran over me with their big wheels!
I stepped on a leaf from the forest, I thought and went back into the forest.


  1. Amazing description Sam I love how you express
    your feelings and describe the black smoke.

  2. awesome Samuel I love the part when you said horrible smoke

  3. This is excellent writing Sam we also watched this video and wrote about it.

  4. I agree with the other boys, Sam!

    I really like the way you use strong verbs to describe what is happening. Bravo!

  5. I agree that you wrote the story in your own words very well!
    Even though the video was short, it was still cool, especially when you wrote it!

    Sincerely, Teva Tait.

  6. Hannah (Sam's Aunty)18 August 2012 at 17:54

    Sam, I really liked the words you used in this story! It makes it interesting, like there is a lot of action happening and it is easy to imagine! Very cool. I hope you keep writing more stories. From your best Aunty Hannah