To my right I see my wall that has heaps of things all over it like art, to my left I see my new draws nice and clean as a whistle. I look up and see my model aeroplane floating above me, with string that blends in with the air. “Hmmm” I say, and look at my shelf with some things that I got for my birthday, like Lego. What if Lego becomes real and came to life? That will be fun, I thought. They will bounce on my desk and try to work my computer. They might even download the Lego texture pack, play Minecraft and even make a multiplayer server. I do not even know how to do that.
This must be me and this must be my room!
Great Sam!
ReplyDeleteThe part at the end is great!
I like how you added some of your own little bits in with the Lego coming alive!
I agree with Felicity.
ReplyDeleteI love the part about the Lego coming alive.
Great work Samuel!
ReplyDeleteI also like the part where you said "What if Lego becomes real and came to life?" it made me a imagine them climbing on your shelf. I think this is a awesome piece of writing. Well done:)
Great work Samuel. Your writing is so cool. You describe your room well. The picture is cool too. I like the angle it is on:)
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